{"id":775,"date":"2022-12-21T19:08:34","date_gmt":"2022-12-21T19:08:34","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/capefearchristianacademy.org\/?p=775"},"modified":"2022-12-21T19:56:01","modified_gmt":"2022-12-21T19:56:01","slug":"be-still-senioritis-we-still-have-an-essay-to-write","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/capefearchristianacademy.org\/be-still-senioritis-we-still-have-an-essay-to-write\/","title":{"rendered":"Be Still Senioritis…We Still Have An Essay to Write"},"content":{"rendered":"\t\t
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17 years of living, growing and being molded into a young adult ready to move into the next stage of life. College and new life experiences are on the very cusp and within reach. The college application process can be tedious, time-consuming, and nerve-wracking. Will your application be enough to gain admission to your chosen college? After all the parts of the applications are filled in and ready to submit you will still need to attach your essay or personal statement. This is the best way to show the admission counselor at your potential college why they need to pick you above all other applicants. <\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t

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Admission counselors want to see what you as a potential student will bring to the campus and examples of those attributes that have been practiced and illustrated in the essay. The best way to do that is to be a memorable standout. The transcript and letters of recommendation are only a very small piece that will showcase who you are to the person deciding if you are a fit for the college. Use your essay to demonstrate to the admissions counselor why and how you will be a positive asset to the campus. What will the opportunity to be an alum of your selected college allow you to be representative of the school? <\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t

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\u00a0Always be genuine with your essay. Pieces that are not genuine and do not ring true will find themselves relegated to the bottom of the stack. In other words, don\u2019t be \u2018try hard,\u2019 if so this will leave the reader feeling like the piece is inauthentic and contrived.<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t

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Surprisingly, another put-off for admission counselors is an essay that reads too edited and perfect. Once an essay filters its way through several adults that offer suggestions and revisions, the essay will lose the voice of the original author. <\/span><\/p>

Admission counselors that range from Ivy league to state-supported universities concur they are looking for one thing: self-reflection. Students that take the time to incorporate self-reflection into their essays show the ability to take self-discovery and make connections that may not have been visible before. By far the biggest mistake most high school seniors make is to treat their essays as a place to list out their laundry list of awards and accolades in text form. While you might work some of your accomplishments into the essay, the purpose behind the essay is to allow an insight into you as a person and how that will impart a positive impact on your chosen university. <\/span><\/p>

A well-developed stand-out essay will have all the same elements of literature you studied through high school: strong images, clear concise writing, minimal grammatical errors, emotional language, and an overall theme, but so will numerous other hopeful people in your same situation wanting to be accepted. <\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t

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There is no simple checklist for an essay that will guarantee admission. However, the standouts will have several things in common regardless of the specified prompt they will: <\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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  • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tClearly answer the prompt. The essay can be filled with analogies, vivid imagery, and connecting parallels, but if it doesn't answer the selected prompt then it fails from the get-go. If your essay can\u2019t answer a question, how can the admissions team expect that you will be able to follow expectations on campus? <\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t
  • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tTell a story. Plot points that are exciting and enticing get lost if the story isn't told in a captivating way. Think in terms of scenes in a movie or soundbites to hold interest. Think about the people you follow on your social media platforms like Instagram and TikTok. These people are most likely to be able to fully encapsulate and capture a story in short scenes and clips while still keeping interested. <\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t
  • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tShare a catalyst for growth. Successful essays tell about failures, obstacles, and mistakes with the lessons that came from those moments. It\u2019s ok to share the parts you are least proud of. It isn\u2019t only the highs that shape us. It is the lows too. Consider did your low enable you to develop a positive character trait that was not there before? How will that trait make you an asset to the college? <\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t
  • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tDemonstrate reflection. Dig deep and avoid summarizing your story. The ability to internalize and self-reflect demonstrates a skill set that will promote self-awareness and growth. Create a place within your essay that allows for self-reflection and create a balance between self-assurance and benign unguarded with your reflection. <\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t
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    While college essays will have a list of common things, they will also avoid specific things. Below we share the biggest don’ts compiled from admission counselors, senior literature teachers, and those with strong essays that were admitted to their choice of college to help you craft an admission-worthy essay for college. <\/span><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t

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    • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tDon\u2019t use clich\u00e9s. There are many topics that admission counselors see on rinse and repeat. Some of the most cliche topics include overcoming sports injuries, tragedies such as the death of a loved one, and volunteer\/missionary-type trips<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t
    • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tDon\u2019t use a thesaurus to sound like someone other than yourself. <\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t
    • \n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/i>\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tThe biggest don't of all: Do not procrastinate. You will need two people to read and offer suggestions: 1 adult who teaches or is a counselor basically someone who knows effective writing so that they can give you the most constructive feedback while allowing your voice to remain true in the essay. <\/span>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/li>\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/ul>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t
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